Hello Ben, I really enjoyed reading your story because you have described the character in a specific way. Also you have explained what he does and what he looks like. And someone in your class is describing another character in your story.
Hello Ben, I really enjoyed reading your story you made because you described the character in a way everyone could understand. Also you have explained what this guy does in the dark. Where did you find information about this person called Devil Jin?
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ReplyDeleteHello Ben,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story because you have described the character in a specific way.
Also you have explained what he does and what he looks like. And someone in your class is describing another character in your story.
Hello Ben,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your story you made because you described the character in a way everyone could understand. Also you have explained what this guy does in the dark. Where did you find information about this person called Devil Jin?
From: Jamie